Here is what i have been working on lately… I think it really takes into account the lessons i have learnt about music theory and song structure.

I have really branched out into synthesising my out sounds to make my songs more personal to me.

I hope to revisit this song a little later and fix it up

Groovewell (http://pretensionmusic.blogspot.com/)

Yeah very cool mate. That’s a pretty solid riff you’ve got there. It could use some variation however.

The drums you’ve got there are sounding good. Gated snare awesome but there is definitely room for more percussion. that would help to fill it out a bit more and keep it interesting.

countermelodies are working well too. Nice arrangement.

Toilet Trained (http://soundcloud.com/moth-hunter)

I like the sounds you have got there.

I would put some off-beat hats in there to get the off beat groove going better. in fact i would develop the percussion a bit more actually get a bit of variety

In terms of general composition, it felt a bit..well bitty, in the sense i felt it could have built more to slightly more obvious peak. i think if you added some percussive elements to get the song going you could restructure it a little bit.

But, thought production was good, liked the vibe

LifeOnMTV (http://soundcloud.com/machinetooloperation)

acid fuck yeah

yeah the drums could use some work, as mentioned above, i was expecting an offbeat hat and some shakers and stuff hahaha i know it’s cliche, but its effective in getting the groove going.

nice ideas in there, dark at first then not so dark, even a bit festive in some parts.

nice work man

Thierry01 (http://soundcloud.com/thierry-le-dj)

Sounds good i like the acid sound you introduce through out the track sound great for the dance floor but i can’t really hear the Hats i would say rise them up a little..but other than that its really good